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Old 07-11-04, 12:26 AM   #26
Triple_N
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ok this battle was weak but I'm a vote

Rising...your opener was wack an so was your closer an everything in btw was jus ok or wack also, the jesus stuff was close to being good personals but somehow you messed those up, your verse was a little upsettingcuz all your personals an punches were close to being hot, your wordplay was kinda weak an your metas were lacking but you were jus a little rewording or rewriting from having a fire verse keep elevating you'll get there

Flow: 7/10
Punches:6/10
Personals: 4/10
Structure: 5/10
Metas: 5/10
Overall: 27/50

God Son......ok you weren't much better, your opener was horrible don't do that again, your closer was a little better not much, you had a few punches nothing special, an your personals were momma jokes not good or creative at all, you had a few metas an a little wordplay, so even though a lot of your verse was played the punches that hit. hit hard so thats it

Flow: 5/10
Punches: 7/10
Personals: 6/10
Structure: 4/10
Metas: 6/10
Overall: 28/50

Close battle but god son edged it out by a little
Vote: God Son
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