Aight Check It..

Va: 4/10
Your Emotion Wasnt Realy Felt...Your Flow Was Off...and That Structure Was Wack. This Better Of Been Your First Topical Cause It Wasn't Good. Just Elevate.

Rated: 6.5/10
Good Drop..Flow A Lil Touchy...But Your Emotion Was Pretty Nice Threwout. Your Structure Was Decent...Nice Usuage Of Words. Keep Dropping Ill ISh.

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