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Old 07-11-04, 04:58 AM   #7
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This battle wasn't that good aswell, what was a promising topic was ruined. Murk needs to sort his structure out, it was all over the place... looked more like 10 lines stretched to 20. Jokah's was a lot better, but still could be improved. Story tellin was Ok by both of you, but again could be improved. Jokah had the better vocab by far.

v/Jokah

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