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Old 07-11-04, 07:27 PM   #11
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AIGHT THIS BATTLE WAS OK...
DEADLY:you need 2 extend your vocab,your structure was wierd,your punches werent 2 great,it jus seemed like you dint care bout this battle...
INSANE 16:you came with better structure,flow,vocab,n punches,my only thing i dint like was some of your lines were stretched n dint fit into the overall flow of your verse.
VOTE/INSANE 16
PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOUR:"HONEST VOTES "
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130025
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134245
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134418