calamity
you had nice flow and all. you kept ur structure nice
ur lines were a lil short ur verse was short and simple
you followed a good story line about brittany..
but you seem like u had emotion at first and after you didnt
overall 7/10

restricted
you had nice flow and better strucutre i liked ur verse
u had greater emotion then calamity ..u followed ur storylines
but not as well. u won becuz of nearly flawless structure and flow
overall 9/10

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