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Old 07-11-04, 08:33 PM   #6
truth a.k.a....
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CASS:you tried i'll give ya that,but your only decent punch was so played i've seen it in the last 5 battles ,your structure needs work,along with your vocab,but ya verse was good for a newbie...
Datruth:liked your opener but dint like your closer,struture was aight,ryme scheme was good ,overall you had the better verse ......
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