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Old 07-11-04, 08:33 PM   #14
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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i didnt enjoy this battle much
killah
you had newbish type strucutre with not much substance in your lines
this messed up ur flow.. and you just didnt come hard enough
u had weak punchline and all
overall 5/10

illunitic
your strucutre was much better this amde ur flow much better
and evrything fell into place ur verse was fair.. weak punchlines..
and some strong punchlines.. ur lines were filled with more substance
than his and ur better punchlines won you the battle
overall 6.8/10
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