Apoth couldnt flip ill,by turnin the word sick over with a spatula..
and battling people backwards only time his punches be attackin-us..(they backfire)
wordplay was ight...rhyme is a lil off but it works...7.1/10
call in calvary,cause in this battle of wits,your straws drawn short..
his status=dork,"Johny Cockrin wont help you win battles in this court"..
1st and second line pretty decent..good concept...7.7/10
Overall....14.8/20
I got bones to pick w/ you, so ill rip out ya skeleton & break it,
Don't fake it. . . calamity isn't ur user name. . . . . . . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . Its aimed at ur sig rhyme & how we rate it.
dope ish....8.2/10
Kid wants me naked, coz we all know doods are ya goal,
& his sex is like ear piercings. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . .coz hoops are only found in holes……TROLL!
pretty tight....good wordplay (i love wordplay)...8/10
Overall...16.2/20
Overall Apothesis won this...his wordplay was better, ur first bar was dope i was feelin u more in this battle
can ya both plz drop HONEST votes on my battle versus star...good shit keep at it:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133764