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Old 07-11-04, 11:48 PM   #21
For$akeN
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la la's drop:

wow that was just.............................................. ..
a flat-out self-glorification drop seriously were you in a stage of
your life that your brain told you that being full of yourself wins a
battle fo ya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
well I say flow was nice anywayz you had multis I have to say
that in what i'm typing of course.....your originality/creativity
was not all original I have to type aswell.....punches weren't
that good but it was decent in my opinion........................
personals weren't there at all thats not a good sign.............


Shabba Ranks a.k.a. Gottaasswhoopin4u drop:

ok that was overall a pretty good verse I was really feeling
it most of the time it fell off sometimes tho but hey every drop does!
ok hmmm.........flow was nice which means the syllable count
was on point aswell.........multis was aight nothing special also....
originality/creativity was pretty good in my eyes............................
punches was aight I was feeling the majority of them all...........
personals well you had them opener was a personal also
and that and the fact you keep self-glorification lines to a
mininum & none.......

my vote goes to: Shabba Ranks....

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