super:none of your punches hit in my eyes.. i dont mean to seem blunt, but i wasent really feeling your verse that much... id say elevation on your punches coukld help you..
va:your structure was a little annoying.. you had some nice multies int here tho.. your verse was a lil bit filler, but the punches that oyu did put out actually hit, so id have to say this battle was yours..
Vote/Va
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