Banned: Cheating
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IP:
Decent battle. Wasnt feelin a lot of it.
va: Ya had a pretty decent flow, and I picked up on the three line bars there at the beginning. Not really many punches were bein thrown rom ya though, talkin about his guys bein blue. Kinda the stuff that anyone can think of, you need to get a lil more creative with it, and personal. Throw in some good metas, and some multies and itll help ya flow, and make ya verse sound sick. Just basically need to come harder.
supercilious: I aint catch on to ya flow really, you had a lot of streched lines, then some short lines. The structure was just all out of place. Your opener was cool, but it really was just all about you. You did have a few good meta in there, I think that lifted your battle over his, and the punches were aight. I liked the way you ended the battle, but once again you didnt really direct that towards him. You need to come harder also.
Overall battle goes to supercilious for being a lil more creative, and throwin more punches.
v/supercilious
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