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Old 07-11-04, 11:56 PM   #34
truth a.k.a....
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killa:some decent lines,but i was'nt feelin your punches,structure was alright nothing that really caught my eye,your flow was about average,need better vocab though.
legacy:unlike killa's verse i was feelin all your punches,you came with a good opener n thought your closer was good also,your ryme scheme was koo,my only advice would be 2 extend your lines by like 2 sylables but thats bout it,jus a suggestion....
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