listen to wat capital said, I saw dat Ur punches were going places but U left them in the sand. U should end lines just AS strong or if not, stronger than U begin them. U flow was better than Shellz, U had a personal that wasnt too good but It was ok for a closer. U should work on vacab and connecting better wit Ur punches.
Ur verse gets a 6 out of 10

Shellz, Ur lines need a lot of work. They were just pops and talk. U had one good punch but it only brushed Chronics shoulder a lil. nothing fanzy here. I wasnt really feeling Ur flow and U should work on Ur vocab a lot. U miss spelled a four letter word, "Fell" Ur wrote feel off. thats wrong. Ur verse gets a 2 out of 10

Punches, HC
Flow, HC
Structure, HC
Metaphores, none
Wordplay, none
Overall, HC

V/ High on Cronic

P.S. hit up atleast one of my battles in my sig and drop an honest vote please, thanx. keep elivating.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..