View Single Post
Old 07-12-04, 12:52 AM   #10
Orijinal
Bitches I've Sonned
 
Orijinal's Avatar
 
Posts: 456
From: Orijinal, a young lyrical mind who loves tearin' other challengers heads off and put a loss onto their record. He hates losing, he hates cheaters, he hates crew votes, dickriding and any other way of letting others win easily. Holla at 'em.
IP:

Im'ma click-clack six-gats to pist'-smack Riff Raff/
Six-whacks and this-cats down for the dirt-nap/
EHH I GUESS..THE MULTIES WAS GOOD..AIGHT OPENER 7/10
I rip-raps so sick-that they bitch-smack Riff-Raff in Half/
with so much wit-that they take his breathe away like tic-tacs/
DUDE NICE WIT MULTIES..BUT NOTTA GOOD PUNCH..PLAYED DA TIC-TACS 6/10
Stick & stab hits & jabs like kindey punches until your lip's-black/
You're Riff "Ruffle", Im hungry enough-to eat the whole "chip"-bag/
HEH..I LIKE THE RUFFLE & CHIPS LINE..GOOD..8/10
I'm hard to follow like a zig-zag/
this-fag wanna battle? Im'ma clap-black like Ja in his last vid-cast/
NAH IT AINT HAPPNIN.."CLAP BACK" WAS PLAY'D ASWELL..6/10
Riff Raff, any-last words before I sit-back to chill/
This bitch-ass got served like food straight off the grill/
AIIGHT CLOSER..LIKE I SAID..AIIIIIIIIGHT..7/10

34/50

mr "goodbar" good you are but your nowhere near my stature.
my quick wit spits hit faces that hard ............
.............they leave jaws fractured//
EHH..I WAS HOPIN A PUNCHLINE OPENER..THATS JUSS BEIN HOOD ON DA OPENER 6/10
shit bitch jus quit you couldnt rip a wet news-paper
im the first vet hes ever met...... he a newb-chaser.//
EHH..NUTTIN SPECIAL..JUSS A SPACER..LOOKIN 4 PUNCHES 5/10
dude youll loose this dule im a murder ya.
fuck punchlines how this for a personal.........
.......ive never heard of ya//
NOT HAPPNIN.."YA" AT THE SAME LINE ENDINGS..NOT HAPPNIN WEAK..6/10
you bring shame and disgrace on your pround nation
i mean ive battled better cats.......
........down the stray kitten foundation.//
KINNA SIMPLISTIC PUNCHLINE..BUT....A PUNCHLINE..6/10
cant be arsed with this bitch...... fuck this im out
youve been hithard below the belt.....
................now "your nuts are in your mouth"(goodbar qoute)
EHH..A PERSONALL..BUT..A WEAK ONE..IIGHT CLOSER..7/10

30/50

VOTE--GOODBAR
Can yall please vote honestly on my current battle, heres the link, please!:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133559
__________________
Mike Hawk is a wackass......