New to RB
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IP:
ok Im not gonna go into deep detail like polifik did...but...
LOT: good multis....good vocab...structure was also good...good metaphors also...no real flaws from what I can see..maybe a little more emotion in there...but over all well done...
R: pretty good structure...good emotion...flowed well...vocab was also well done...it just seemed there was more that you served up...well done...
Overall both drops were nice...but since I have to choose which one was better Im gonna have to go with Restricted....like I said he just had more emotion and a slightly better structure...
Vote-R
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