soldier your structure was wack n ur punches were weak n u need more punches, u had no metaz n hardly any wordplay u werent creative enuf either. the closer had gud intentions in it but the punch just wasnt there, personals were weak but could easy b improved

lil trip your structure was aight n it flowed, punches were weak but bet them of soldier opener n closer were weak, u need harder punches n to b more creative n use better wordplay instead of basic boring vocab.

v-lil trip