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Old 07-12-04, 05:26 AM   #17
BrOtHa-HoOd
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eragance need to realy improve on the structure, it makes it hard 2 read n u threw punches that didnt connect n didnt use a range of vocab or metaz or personals..

big chase had a few punches that hit but they were still weak, he was a lot more creative than eragence n his structure was a lot easier to read

v - big chase