both verses were weak n neither of u used a range of vocab or creativity, more ppl will vote if ur verse it tite, there were sum use of personals comin frum jyminy n his punches were hittin that lil bit harder but there wasnt much in it, jyminy also had the better of structure and flow

v - jyminy

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