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Old 07-12-04, 01:25 PM   #6
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Will Nova-Your verse could have been better I felt.You didn't have too many punches to me.Your punches were weak and I know you could have came better than that.I think you need to work on ya flow more and also try to start adding some mulites to make your verse better.But you should have came with stronger punches then what you had.

One Man Band-I really liked your verse.It was a nice verse all around.You had a very good opener.Your punched were on point.You had great structure and flow.Keep it up.

Vote=One-Man-Band

Hit one of my battles back,after all,I did take time 2 read this shit!!!
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