shadow :

admit it killawbwoy
when we were in lyrical destruction u said it ur self damn discharge u really are that sick.....
get off my dick,
give this starvin ethiopian some spicy food cuz thats his only chance of droppin hott shit....

^^ok i got a caouple problems with this bar...i really cannot stand the structure its really annoying nd unnecessary...newyas your bar was too long should have made it shorter...1st line was more of a self glorification than a punch or a set up to a punch and i figured your 2nd line would have something to do with the first but it really didnt it was a decent punch and a good personal tho not too good

overall : 4/10

state capitol :

Your wack at text, heres facts ,
.......only time your skilled with your fingers is when your moms horny..
Shadows Lines are like His Girlfriend last night,
.................................................. .Your "wore-out" Shit Bores-Me..

^^same with your structure its really annoying when the lines are long if they were shorter the structure wouldnt have really mattered but when they are that long its gay..decent punch i think u had a better personal than shadow...mediocre punchline

overall : 5/10

state u barely won this your punch was weak but shadows was weaker

vote : state

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