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Old 07-12-04, 02:09 PM   #19
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obviously :va: won this battle....popa doc your verse hardly rhymed at all...you had mediocre punches and a basic verse all around...va you had some good multies and wordplay and a couple decent punches but you both need to elevate...va your verse was pretty good until the last couple bars and then the structure just went to sleep... your lines were short and uneven no flow...really bad stuff but popa yours was even worse...you need to elevate in all areas

Flow : ::VA::
Structure: popa
Punches: VA
Multies: VA
Wordplay: VA
Consistency: VA
Personals: none

vote: VA

weak battle

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