damaged1:

i was really feeling your verse good wordplay and multies...you had some hott punches but the rest of your punches were just mediocre and i think you could elevate there... your structure suffered alot...some lines were stretched and/or forced...even with the bad structure your flow was pretty consistent decent verse from you could have been better use personals next time

overall : 6.5/10

mc riot:

overall i think your verse was pretty basic for the most part your first 3 bars were thoughtless there was a good consistent flow to them but they could have obviously been better...your opener is supposed to be one of the hottest bars so people will be intrigued to read and/or vote on the battle...so your first half of your verse was really weak...you picked up momentum on the second part and had some good punhes but not good enough to win elevate also use personals!!!

overall : 5.5/10

vote: damaged1

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