Thread: Tourn Vs EB
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Old 07-12-04, 02:35 PM   #8
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I didnt really feel that EB was throwing any punches in this battle. Which makes it hard to give him the win. The flow wasnt too bad, I rapped it out to the beat im listening to, a few of the lines were streched though, try to get the syllables a lil closer. I did notice some nice wordplay, no real good metas. You did have a decent verse and all, it just really wasnt intended for a battle verse. Need to come harder and hit more punces next time.

Tourn, nice flow and pretty good structure - the mT Dew line, which was prety funny anyways. Just try not to force the punches, decent closer, come a lil hader on the opener though. Throw in a few more multies when you have longer lines, and the flow will improve a lot more. A few nice metas also, i was feelin em. Come with some more personals, those will be your hardest hittin punches.

v/Tourn