Pretty good stuff Envee, you opened up real hard with the personal punch. The flow was on point and consistent all three bars. Some nice metas, pretty good verse all around, missin a few multies though.

Golden Shellz ya gotta come with a battle mind, i dunno think your gonna kill you opponent or something. Just imagine your on stage and you want everyone to laugh at the other person, if not then your gonna get laughed at. You want to try and say something towards the other person to get a response from people. Because if the other person says something better then they are going to get the response. Your structure is good, just think on a higher level, come harder. Throw in some more multiple rhymes, some good metaphors. Get personal with it, look at his avator and so forth.

v/Envee