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Old 07-12-04, 04:39 PM   #16
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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Black Theif: 5/10
Your Punches Were Alright...You Had Sum Originality But I Heard A Lot Of That Shit Before..I Guess I Have Just Been Around Too Long. You Had Aight FLow...Just Try Wit Word Usuage and Creativitie.

State Capitol: 6.5/10
Your Shit Wasn't Anything Spectacular So Quit With THe Big Ego..You Just Happened To Edge Him Out With More Original Lines. Your Flow Was Same...Both Structures Were Wack. Just Stay Up and Work On Word Usuage As Well.

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