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Old 07-12-04, 05:20 PM   #10
.gunit101
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This one wasn't bad....

WINC came wit some pretty played lines like the 'left' 'right' one, but he had a few nice metas. Flow was off a bit because he fluxuated between long and short lines. Overall it wasn't a bad verse, just needed some consistency, and maybe a really decent punch or two.....

DaTruth was a little bit better. His lines flowed pretty well because they were all even. He had a few nice metas too. I liked his consistency, but I guess he could have had a few more personals. Overall I think it was a well rounded verse and was good enough to take the win in this battle......

Vote - DaTruth
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