Thread: Tourn Vs EB
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Old 07-12-04, 05:33 PM   #9
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eb - you had zero punches...which is a necessity when you battle someone...your flow was average...and the structure was pretty good...basically these are filler lines for a longer battle...no offense...but just no punches man...remember next time you battle throw punches it will help you out drastically...keep doin your thing man..

Tourn - you had some above average punches...the mt. dew one was good...structure was pretty good...flow was forced sometimes...like QB said throw in some multis and it'll improve the flow a lot...

overall...eb elevate homie...throw punches...I mean thats what you do when you are fightin some one right? you throw punches tryin to hurt them as much as possible...well its the same with this shit...verbal punches hurt a man(or womans) pride...but yeah tourn had more though put into his it seemed like so Im gonna have to go with him...

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