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shadow - ehh that was blah....if u worded shit better it wouldnt have been so stretched...u tried TOO hard....just let it flow and do ya thang....punch concept was good but really u need to word it right to hit hard...u tried too hard....i could tell...i give it a 3.7/10....
state capitol - eh this wasnt that great either...def a lil better of a flow....but still stretched....meta was decent....the personal (link) really didnt have a good effect....woulda been better if u didnt use it....close battle bu had the better flow and wording which made ur punch a lil better....give it a 4.1./10....
Vote - State Capitol
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