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Old 07-12-04, 08:36 PM   #21
.gunit101
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This one was pretty easy to decide....

QB came with some halfway decent punches. His flow wasn't that bad, but was off in a few places. He had a few nice metas, and overall I thought it was an OK verse....

The star, however, seemed to lack any good punches. All I saw were a bunch of played concepts that were worded horribly. You need to lose the stretched style too. Just because you make the font smaller, doesn't mean you made the lines shorter....

Vote - QB