Thread: YaYo Vz Joval8
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Old 07-12-04, 09:00 PM   #11
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From: Trenton 609|look me up bitch
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Joval8 what was with at flow? one line had 5 words and the next 15 that fuck up. plus the style sucked punches weak and personnals were not there. i don't think that mults were there cause of the flow overall i didn't like it.

yayo it was good flow was happening and damn let me just say it was all there.
best line: He QUICK TO BACKDOWN like dem bravehearts say//
Cuz he wont wanna spit after wat he juss seen today//
Yo i got this kid in line bout to get served give me ya lunch tray//
Joval gotta learn to drop rhymes the right way//

you no who i'm voting for
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