yeah like Flip said....servin dem up's rhymes were way too basic and corny. your structure was off and dat made it hard to feel your shit homie. keep workin on dat shit tho u have some potential.
Yayo...i was feelin your verse man....your shit was pretty ill. i liked da basic punchlines all around and my fav line was "This mcs a nobody, look he got no avatar//
His lines run~on like he dosent know whats a bar/." i just felt that one all da way.
vote: YaYo


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