you can dq my vote if you want but i dont think anybody got what you were talking about in some places and thats on you if it doesnt make sense not the voters

Spoke a rhyme of water, and ya dyin to float
Wrote shes a girl...but ya afraida dickrydin votes?
->>i dont like the first line at all but the second is pretty nice

Neva make it big, im here to expose the hoar in ya sig
And when I sed 'wacks in you' the bitCh started to dig
->>wack

Defense low, and wack is stress, and each word spokens tense
Shiet only 'shellz' you throw come at the end of ya sentence
->>dont get the second line at all

Face-it, aint gonna fake-it, fuck ya jus str8 up dont fit
how u gon rap when ya look like an octopus takin a hit
->>i get the hit thing but still terrible second line

Claim to fame, but ya wack as before still didnt change
Only thing you did right...was oxy-moronin ya name
->>kinda decent closer

I flow like a pro tho still i stay sexier than yo girl
How i spit better rhymes than you...and yet its a mans world?
->>nothing extroardinary but i could bob my head to it

You coming at me nigga you didnt bring ya A game
cuz ive heard every femcee joke and been called everyname
->>same as first 2

But again ill explain cuz its not gettin to ya brain
check me out this girl spits fire and throws flames
->>filler

The votes are not in so this battle is up for grabs
This pussy prolly seen and rode more dicks than i have
->>decent punchline

Woah I know that aint ya only rhymes cuz ive got plenty
You get no pussy thats why ya lotion bottle stay empty
->>pretty good got a chuckle from me

Im simply...the best... lyrical shots to ya chest will put u to rest
Exterminatin these pest one by one with no weapon
->>filler

You need some help but sorry theres is none for your condition
I thought you was comin harder than that...change ya name nigga you have no ambition
->>stretch but alright closer

v-ThisGirlSpitFire

vote on mine: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134617

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