The Epitome Of Greatness
From: NY ... Born And Raised |
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IP:
the star:
|~|Rookie of the Month? What a ‘joke’, below ‘typical’, record consist of peeps on his ‘dick’|~|
|~|Now with losing streak, loss breath to ‘choke’, leaving him ‘lyrical’ ‘nick’|~|
^^first of all all this shit ( l ~ l and ' ' " ") is really unnecessary it doesnt make your verse look hotter...your punch was decent you didnt really use a personal tho and it was pretty basic definately could have been better
overall : 4/10
genicide:
this stars fallen... u neva could earn the title of greatness..
could give her a blueprint of a win.. and she still couldnt make it..
^^first off there were 2 good personals in your first line and dont see that much very good shyt...2nd line also hott i was feeling this probably best punch i have seen so far in the tourney
overall : 9/10
vote: genicide
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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion
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