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Old 07-13-04, 01:07 AM   #15
Triple_N
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Ok battle.....Breakdown

Shadow....ok structure was horrible, I hated it, flow was off, setup line was ok, punch was wack an seriuosly played, you needed a good meta in there or something but you didn't so I'm a say you really disappointed me with that one cuz I know you do better than that man, I'll give ya 4/10


State....not much better structure was just as bad, flow was off too, coulda used a meta but you didn't, you used some wack wordplay but it was wordplay nonetheless, setup was ok punch was kinda played but it was a little personal so that only thing u got this battle for, is that u got personal, I'll give ya 5/10

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