*Stank*

How can i Take you Serious, Your names associated with Trash,
if This battle was Material...
...Id be classified as gold an you as Brass!!
->>I like your opener prob my favorite line

Talking of Names, Your Recieving Immensely Ferocious Falls, (False)
I'll prove it doesnt have to be...
...Christmas For Me to Be Decking Your Halls!!
->>sound like you got a dictionary and looked up big words...pretty good punch in
the second line though

Like Birds with broken wings, your continuously falling Short,
Looking through your battle lines...
... There More played than Basketball Courts!!
->>good second line kinda overused but its all good

Riff raff's forgotten, Thats why he punctuates with Exclamation,
Point is he could never get high...
... Cause he seriously lacks the Elevation!!
->>made me laugh good punch

I've laughed off this Herb with a few of strung together Lines,
Riff Calling Himself a Veteran...
...Is like an Accurate plan without Designs!!
->>wasnt feeling the last line at all

*RR*

im the greatest stank your whack face it.
if this were a live battle.......
.....gurls wouldnt clap if u got on stage naked.
->>weak

this geek couldnt get cool if we stripped him of his clothes
took him outside in winter.......
....and buried him in snow.
->>funny punchline

i hit heavy with the flow punchlines laid out.
unlike your whole fucking verse.........
.........every rhyme played out
->>decent

u couldnt knock me from my pedastool pathetic fool (pedastle)
was a better rapper than you are now.......
............b4 id even left school
->>kind fillerish

your not even in a crew they all left you rejected
You Used A Shit Load Of Punches........
.......... But None Of Them Connected
->>good closer

it was real close but i think the stank took it it seemed like there was a lot more thought put into it and even the weak spots i could still see effort...rr looked laid back like not tryin too hard and thats kinda what decided it for me you gotta bring your a-game in battles

v-stank

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