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New to RB
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IP:
^^^agrees 100%^^^^
I know I cant vote but Im still gonna voice my opinion...
tourn - pretty good structure/flow...a couple good punches...one being the name being blurred...still lacking that one hard hard punch...and maybe a better finisher...
LL- thought was good...I like the idea that you had...just some of it didnt make sense...or seemed like a little kid was writin it...flow was good same with structure...but you didnt have that great of punches...just dont think you came as nice as tourn...
if I could vote...vote-Tourn
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