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Old 07-13-04, 08:05 AM   #5
Sniper
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close i can't go by struture cause it was tied same as flow but when you look at the words. obivous genicide

flow: tied
style: tied
opener: genicide
mults: niether
punches: schema you tryed thats all i can say it was that bad
personals: genicide
closer: schema

first ill put holes in you like when beatles eat leaves (what does he have to do with a beetle that was a bad opener and punch)
you got the gout motherfucker? why you weak in the knees (boo boo, how can you see if his knees are weak?)
you shermed out motherfucker...think you beatin me? please (two othersfuckers in a row not good, stop trying to strech the line)
im too sweet with the keys...i add spices so youre done when i cook (i ain't even gonna say anything to that)
how ya like that real-nice-shit..you prolly love how this looks (i loe how it looks, it floating in the toliet all brown and crap)
ill start a war cause i feel-like-it like double-ya bush (this was you best line and i wasn't feeling it)
wait for the score...its a crisis outdone by a rook (the two thins don't go togetther)
maybe its your candy-cane writin' and bubble gum hooks (i think you got it twisted it should be candy cane hooks)
ive prolly got this kid frightened from the pummel he's took (so so but who uses the word pummel lol)
i guess i could let you leave now and just one-up the "w" sum in my book (good closer)

Why do you waste your time battlin.. we kno u a herb jus from the name schema (good from before the ... it just me what a herb?)
u plaster more shit on the forum walls than people in commercials for zima.. (damn nice i agree)
ur wack... repping a fuckin crew that i never even heard of.. LETHAL SINZ?? (personal nice ha)
and u think ur good but.. riding on vets dicks is the only way ur getting WINZ.. (damn still hot)
you didnt know who u was goin up against.. this is Genicide Reppin Dreamcast (hopefully you being somthing behide that)
with u herb..the only time u getting the number one pick is when ur teams-last (didn't get it)
just like ur sig says u dont got a chance at rb.. ur skills are all just jaded.. (ohhhhhhh)
and if someone said u drop a hot verse.. u know u have just been overrated. (true true)
known to knock ya head so hard you won't even see straight, u'll waddle in fact
i'm runnin 'circles' around this kid who's more 'square' than a Bottle of Jack
you killed yaself fuckin' with my tracks, they hotter than a Train wit no Breaks
I'll just Aim for your Fate n' watch the voters say, "you got Slain by the Great!"
(the rest was hot but bad closer)

vote genicide i poll when i got enough posts. 1