Shadow
*im gonna go 2 heaven 4 all the good things i did*
*not commiting crimes and being saved from sins*
/\ Nice opener
*im staying outa trouble and going to that church*
*all my good deeds an praying will pay-off and work*
/\ A nice bar there
*always read the bible and got the cross on my chain*
*i might swear.. but never use the lords name in vein*
/\ Nice again
*im going to heaven.. cuz im good but im not a saint*
*i dont get evrything i pray for no need 4 complaint*
/\ Aight again
*i truely know where im going at the end of my ~live~*
*2 get there im gonna have 2 b unselfish and sacrifice*
/\ True nice bar again
*i go 2 church evry sunday im there right when it starts*
*i cant be a hater.. becuz hate is murder in thy hearts*
/\ Nice biblic word 'thy' well used
*im not going to hell becuz my life would then b a waste*
* i cant go to hell..im a believer and god is making space*
/\ Nice
*i wanna go to heaven but satan will try some retaliation*
*he would lead me to horror, damnation, & devistation*
/\ Nice rhyming
*but if i stay on the right path and stick with the holy lord*
*heaven is were i shall be and with the angels i shall sore*
/\ Nice rhyming again
*im going to heaven cuz i dont fight and im mild tempered*
* im going to heaven.. cuz i beleve and the lord is my shepard*
/\ Nice closer
Limited Edition
A'yo...Heaven or Hell
Death....a stage of life...just part of the path
I speak to myself, reflecting the pains I've had
/\ Nice opener
Heaven or Hell? The question is present in my mind
Hell.....I would deserve it...when it came my time
/\ Good bar this i liked
I am a person..I care for people that I know and love
But I hurt them at the same time for things I've done
/\ Good bar
I live my life for the Lord...but a Devil in motion
But the Bible says my sins are cast into an ocean
/\ Ok line not feelin that much but ok rhyming
I feel that I deserve...to burn in eternal fire
But I wish to be in Heaven...that is my true desire
/\ Nice line
My emotions are confused...I don't know what to expect
Maybe I can try to change my life...I'm not dead yet
/\ Good bar
I go to church.........though not that often at all
I used to pray everynight...but my lifes in a crawl
/\ Na didnt feel this line much
If I ever die by my own hands...where would I end up..?
My best friend says Hell......but wit life I'm fed up
/\ Nice bar good
Well, God will show me the path...everythin has a reason
Maybe it is my destiny......to wonder wit every season
/\ Nice bar
Until the day I die...I may as well to live life well
'Cause until the day actually comes...
...it will be Heaven or Hell...
/\ Good closer
I'm gonn go for Shadow on this purely because i was feelin his slightly more, both had good verses but Ltd Edition wasnt as consistant v/Shadow.
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