Ill Tempa
Yo Genecide, that’s yo name? It sounds like a “STD”//
This nigga must be crazy thinking he can “fuck” wit me//
^not the best opener, but not too bad... 6/10

There’s no way, shape or form that ya lyrics could harm me//
Cuz I’m gonna rip you like clothes from tha Salvation Army//
^this was weak in my opinion... 5/10

You say ya flow is tight and you nice but no one believes ya//
And yo “structure” is fucked like tha “Leaning Tower of Pizza”//
^nice personal, if it was a true one... 6/10

You wanna represent for your people in this battle, tha Fatal Tactics//
I’ll outline yo whole crew in chalk and leave Genicide in a bag of plastic//
^very funny nice one... 9/10

It’s amazing how I come up with these lyrics, some may say it’s magic//
My spits are “Hard”, structure’s sturdy as “Wood”, I’m a true “Class-Sick”//
^who cares, this is not flatter myself this week, throw anotha punch.. 0/10

Yo rhyme scheme is distorted beyond belief, ya lines is stretched like elastic//
I’m gonna be nice and give something away, here’s a loss, you can have-it//
^kinda funny, not bad.. 7/10

You know I’m “hot” cuz I live in Florida where it’s always “sunny”//
And always handle my beef, cuz I got more “straps” than a “mummy”//
^anotha flatter moment, get over yaself.. 0/10

People laugh at you punches, cause they corny not funny//
It’s ILL Tempa I do more damage than a crash test dummy//
^not bad again, get off ya own dick... 5/10

I think you learned yo lesson, so go back to geekin on yo computer//
I got one last question, answer honestly, how’s it feel to be a loser?//
^kinda funny, but didn't follow up anything.. aight closer 7.5/10
45.5/90 = 50.6%

Genecide
shit this nigga thinks he is hot cause he is ill tempered…
after I spit so sick leave this bitches body lyrically dismembered
^nice opener... 9/10 and funny

I knock this nigga down first round and he don’t want no more..
This bitch is done… put a fork in him.. And im only on line four..
^not bad, put a fork in him took a way from the affect... 6/10

why they call you ill tempa anyways… cause ur rhymes arent sick
you probably caught a std u bound to from riding so much dick..
^lol lol lol too funny, ha ha... 10/10

With all the herbs u have ko’ed that’s practically cheating
nigga with that wack verse…my cock is the only mc ur beating*
^lol anotha funny line.. damn nice personal too... 9/10

Bitch you couldn’t handle me even when I was in Fatal Tactic
u always got a hard wood everyone knos that so it aint a classic
^nice closer, towards his crew too.. nice job.. 8/10
42/50 = 84%

*besides the percent, Genecide won this.. he had more personals and both had good structure... ILL Tempa, u wrote a lot but didn't throw as many punches within ur verses, and given that Genecide used STD when he dropped first and i recognized ILL Tempa used it in his first line... that was wack, but whuteva if ya feed do it correctly... but anyways,

my vote: Genecide hands down

nice drop y'all holla!
get at me
fiya gurl
~wun~

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