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Old 07-13-04, 03:07 PM   #10
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shut your mouth kid cuz you talk too much shit, die from being constipated~
putting a "X" as your fuckin' title is the only way you can be highly rated~


Though the first line wasn’t that original, it still made me laugh. I liked it, and the second line was nice too. Tight flow and wordplay also.

He's from Canada i didnt that was a dope hood
Going to class is the only way you can get hard-wood

Uh... Hate to say this, but this was kinda lame. The flow was basic and I suppose you meant desk when you wrote hard-wood. Oh well.

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