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Old 07-13-04, 05:29 PM   #10
Triple_N
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Good Battle......Breakdown for L.I.


She ugly as fuck.. her looks can’t even catch a eye…
Her name states perfectly.. how she cant get a guy…

Nice clever punch there, nice wordplay in set up than you followed it with a hard wordplayed punch, solid drop son...I give it 8/10


Breakdown for Miss


Straight as a rod, swear to God, I don’t look at girls- don’t want their nookie
But when y’all read this verse I weaved, y’all believe, I enjoyed fucking this pussie

Ok this was really amatuerish punch, it was just all round weak, you attempted some wordplay in set up but then blew it in the punch, rookie, nookie, pussie, wussy leave these words out in any punch u think of cuz if u don't it will come out wack an played everytime....I give ya 5/10

Vote: L.I.
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