i can see you ait a challenge by just peepin your {first} {verse}
you the kinda cracka that'll turn rock like fred {durst}
its almost like you {thirst} to to be the {worst}
your [life] and {verse} will get {disspursed} with a surgical [knife] but i aint no {nurse}
you ridin in the back of a {hearse} cuz my lyrics were a {curse} {word} for {word} now everybody happy cuz this {nerd} is outa this {world}
im a scholar and im doin some {schoolin} cuz this kid is {foolin} with the mic he doesnt know what his {doin} he's just {screwin} {around} pretended to be {down} this little {clown} is about to get his smile turned downside up when i come to his {town} he thinks he's the king *snatch* there goes the {crown} {face it} your raps is {basic} let go of your rap dream dont {chase it} get it out of your head {erase it} and {replace it} with dreams of finishing {school} but no you wanted to rap and be {cool} well you see where that {brought you} it {got you} in a position where an mc named skitlz is gona {k.o. you}

im usin this new rhyme sheme tell me which one is better ya'll

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