U had some nice lines in there. "Write my rhymes all my life as it begins and ends/
Broke as fuck cause I'm always out purchasing pens/" or "I'm possesed by hip-hop delivering spirit/I fear it because my hand is constantly scribbling lyrics/" thos were nice dawg.But try and use more vocab. try to paint a verbal picture or else peeps wont wanna read. BUT NICE 1ST POST. HOLLA!!!!!
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Prephix.
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