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Old 07-13-04, 09:32 PM   #7
QBsmasher
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Yeah it was a pretty good battle.

Tourn: Pretty good on the flow, count syllables a little better and it will be right on point...not too bad though. I liked how you had a rhyme from the last bar in the opener of the next bar to keep the flow going. Some good punches that were tied in with metas, not really too personal....but they were pretty hot. No real good multies to tie in with your verse, but over a pretty straight verse.

Drastic: Decent on the flow...you had some streched lines that just threw it off though, tourn was better than you here. Punches you were really personal with and you was on target with them. Pretty hard when you were throwing them as well. A few good multies, nothing spectacular but some added bonuses to your verse.

Pretty tight battle overall...I think it came down to the punches...where Drastic was minimally better.

v/Drastic Outlaw

Please drop honest votes on my battle below...thanks