let me break it down ...
ilmatic: your verse was good man but it seemed like you were trying to rhyme, i dont know, but your punches were decent, but kinda simple lines
mixtape:you had an overall good verse here, personal punches were tight, wordplay was good,you came hard in your opener and you just stayed with the flow all thru..

VOTE:Mixtape

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