ok this is the way stuff goes

mishap/good structure i like the opener, i didnt really understand this line
you half field with bitches, but all want to bone/ did u meen to say half filled??
and how can a person be half filled with bitches?? or were you talkin about their crew?? over all u had good punches the finisher shouldve been the starter u had some good personals not many didnt really hit hard and thats pretty much all u needed to improve

lilchiofthachi/

very week punches i couldnt stand the structure u decided to use and did u have personals?? u had ok personals but the eminem and detroit thing is gettin played out
u had a better finisher but i think it still couldve been better
v/mishap

this vote is just because of an overall better performance