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Old 07-14-04, 02:15 AM   #3
Idyllic Queen
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From: Somewhere over the rainbow...
IP:

I really enjoyed this...its sad, but your emotions were deeply felt. I think the way you set your poem up, structure wise was awesome. It really added more 'texture' to your peice. The beats seemed good throughout the whole thing, nicely written!
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