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New to RB
From: Somewhere over the rainbow... |
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IP:
It seemed to me as the reader that it was forced, the rhyming. What attracted me was the title of the piece...I feel that way with my b/f I hate loving him and not being able to hate him cause he's so mean sometimes. 
This seemed deep, though I dont think the structure was 100% straight, it was true emotion...so keep up on all the writing!
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