lol.. wow.. Durmil ripped it man.. god son i was reading your vers, and with all the hyphens and dashes and htis and that, i was annoyed.. at first i was like..god sons won this .. but then i wasent even half way down durmils verse, and the battle was over lol..big ups to both..
God sons... your verse wasent consistant.. honestly.. it sounded hella hot in the beging part.. then in the middle, it sounded like a different writer.. then in the end the person who was writing the begging came back in..lol how ever the fuck that happened.. but id say if oyu were doign what you did at first, you might have won.. andsick as ghonerea/syphili/aids/herpes is mighty played out.. let those go
..
i gotta go with durmil for having some ill metas, and nice as flow.. i was surprised with durmil.. id say that verse was hot bruh.. good job..
v/Durmill
return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134904