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Old 07-14-04, 04:57 AM   #24
Tempa
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From: Barrel Of Tha Gun
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PLEASE RETURN THA FAVOR.
Me vs. SevenThird


Limited Edition - Good verse. Stayed on topic all tha way through. Had some vocab. in there it was overall good story telling. The ending was strong it helped you alot in my eyes. Nice verse..........7.5/10

Poetic Justice - You had a decent ending but Limited's was better. However you had an edge over him cuz although he had vocab. you had more. You both had good lyrics as far as tha topic goes. So it was close. Overall good verse.....8/10

Vote: Poetic Justice.
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